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best place to advertise personal training service?


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On 10/27/2016 at 11:38 PM, PETN said:

Background pic looks like a screenshot from opening scene of some sort of gay porno. Quite difficult to read the writing so hard to make any other assessment.

oh this is supposed to be an a3 poster the writing is pretty big when it was printed

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Not bad, bro. Looks like a stage shot from an NZIFBB bodybuilding comp, I presume? What was it, and how did you do?

 

I know your question was about where to advertise, but I'd like to give you a bit of advice around the layout of the poster... 

- Although I can't really read the small print in this tiny image, I assume it's talking about your experience and the services you offer. But what jumps out at me is your phone number. And that really illustrates the problem. I would change the hierarchy of information that's on the poster. Instead, make it shout about the services you can offer me. They are what will hook me in. Then make the phone number small - once you've got my attention with the services, I'll find your phone number without you bashing me over the head with it!

 

- In terms of PETNs comment that it looks like a porno. I wouldn't have phrased it quite like that, but yeah... maybe. :-D I think the issue is that because you're wearing low-cut posing trunks, and they're out of shot, it looks like you're not wearing anything. Blow up the image a bit more so that the bottom edge is cropped a bit higher - like at your waist - and I think that would solve the problem.

 

Just my 2c. Feel free to take it or leave it. :-) 

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